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Bars (Feature) – A single woman, who’s just left a strenuous relationship, adopts a child and gives him all the love she has. Why is this their case? For example, are the physicians their psychiatrists? (I’m not suggesting that because it’s on-the-nose, but without some connectivity, it feels random and impersonal.)Ĥ) Adopted Family by V.Y.
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The second half feels like it could be a movie in and of itself, and the connective tissue between the first half and the second is tenuous. And it could probably find ways to communicate the idea with fewer words. For example, I don’t think you need “over their struggles with mental illness,” as we can extrapolate that from their introductions. So that gets this logline off to a wobbly start for me. While I can guess, I’m not sure the clinical definition of “avoidant personality disorder,” and I don’t have a DSM-5 handy. Judge’s Feedback: I think the logline mostly works in a mechanical sense.
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New policies implemented by a new administration could potentially undermine this show.ģ) Untitled by Matt Lombardo (Feature) – A teen with avoidant personality disorder who dreams of being a detective forms a bond with his tormentor in high school-a bulimic former professional ice skater-over their struggles with mental illness and together they team up to track down two rival physicians engaged in a decades long competition to see who can commit the most brazen public murder without being caught. Of course, the drama works better given our current administration. I can imagine all the possible episodes given the wealth of conflict that can be mined from the lives of these teens involved in such an endeavor. Judge’s Feedback: Interesting and topical. The concept feels better suited for a feature.Ģ) No Entry by Angie Engelbert (TV) – After rescuing a man and his son illegally crossing into the United States by water, three conflicted teens put their values to the test by establishing an underground railroad to get refugees safely into the United States. I’m not even sure how this lasts more than a few episodes, as it feels like a one-trick pony. As a TV series, I’m not sure how this survives past season four. Logline could have a crisper quality given its whimsical nature. The twelve (12) loglines chosen to move on to the Semi-Final round, as determined by the judge, are listed at the bottom.ġ) Party Pooper by Gianluca Cosentino (TV) – A socially awkward college student, who loses means to afford tuition, starts running an illegal business of house parties around campus, while serving as the student liaison against the uncontrollable party scene. Loglines submitted via Discord that were not promoted via the online vote, along with those submitted via email, were given to the selection committee of ten (10) writers, who then decided the remainder of the loglines to compete in the first round based on a vote.Ī few loglines were missing required information (title, author, genre, medium, etc.) or the same author submitted multiple loglines and as stipulated by the rules of the competition, and may have been disqualified.īelow are the loglines designated as the top twenty-four (24) in the Drama genre by the selection committee and online vote.
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Loglines submitted via Discord were voted upon publicly online and the nine (9) receiving the most votes were promoted to the first round of judging. All Patreon donors were allowed to submit one logline that was automatically promoted to the first round of judging. There were a total of 425 qualified submissions to the Logline Madness 2020 Competition.